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Phantom shadows that chase my dreams,
Beyond ghostly halls of empty screams,
A voice that whispers just as before,
So quiet at first now shrieks once more.
Unholy the sound; as angels die,
As the storm proceeds to split the sky,
I found this poem in my room while tidying along with about £100 and a few old memories.

Its pretty depressing I know but I still like the way it sounds liek some sort of ancient spell.
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TheForgottenKnight Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2009
its pretty,I love it you should add too it, it feels like there should be more to it
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jethro2112 Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
i like it. it takes you on a short emotional journey.
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titus528 Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2008
it does have a chanty feeling to it.
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DogmaticKerr Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
o.o incredible... :heart:
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hellokristen Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2008
Ooh, I love how it sounds.
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NewlyFormedLegacy Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2008
It IS really depressing. But pretty.

And 100 pounds, that's a lot of money!
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geopy Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2008
because i read it am i under some spell ? :nirvana:
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death-gift Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thats awsomly dark, i love it
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snoogaloo Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
it does have an ancient feel to it. i bet you could write more for it and create a saga or an opus from it :)
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UAH-Art Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2008
Wow, very powerful imagery... it does sound like some sort of spell!
:)
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